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Last Emperor, The

Posted in Uncategorized with tags , , , , , , , , , , , , , on April 30, 2010 by felixmanning1980

Last Emperor, The
Last Emperor, The (1987)

IMDB rating: 7.80

Plot: A dramatic history of Pu Yi, the last of the Emperors of China, from his lofty birth and brief reign in the Forbidden City, the object of worship by half a billion people; through his abdication, his decline and dissolute lifestyle; his exploitation by the invading Japanese, and finally to his obscure existence as just another peasant worker in the People’s Republic.

Last Emperor, The

Directors: Bertolucci Bernardo

Actors: Lone John,O’Toole Peter,Ying Ruocheng,,Dun Dennis,Sakamoto Ryuichi,Young Ric,Tagawa Cary-Hiroyuki,Ikeda Fumihiko,Vuu Richard,Tijger Tsou,Biography,Drama,History,

Can someone help me examine this speech by Franklin Roosevelt about Pearl Harbor?
OK here is the speech

To the Congress of the United States:

Yesterday, December 7th, 1941 - a date which will live in infamy - the United States of America was suddenly and deliberately attacked by naval and air forces of the Empire of Japan.

The United States was at peace with that nation and, at the solicitation of Japan, was still in conversation with its government and its emperor looking toward the maintenance of peace in the Pacific.

Indeed, one hour after Japanese air squadrons had commenced bombing in the American island of Oahu, the Japanese ambassador to the United States and his colleagues delivered to our Secretary of State a formal reply to a recent American message. And while this reply stated that it seemed useless to continue the existing diplomatic negotiations, it contained no threat or hint of war or of armed attack.

It will be recorded that the distance of Hawaii from Japan makes it obvious that the attack was deliberately planned many days or even weeks ago. During the intervening time, the Japanese government has deliberately sought to deceive the United States by false statements and expressions of hope for continued peace.

The attack yesterday on the Hawaiian islands has caused severe damage to American naval and military forces. I regret to tell you that very many American lives have been lost. In addition, American ships have been reported torpedoed on the high seas between San Francisco and Honolulu.

Yesterday, the Japanese government also launched an attack against Malaya.

Last night, Japanese forces attacked Hong Kong.

Last night, Japanese forces attacked Guam.

Last night, Japanese forces attacked the Philippine Islands.

Last night, the Japanese attacked Wake Island.

And this morning, the Japanese attacked Midway Island.

Japan has, therefore, undertaken a surprise offensive extending throughout the Pacific area. The facts of yesterday and today speak for themselves. The people of the United States have already formed their opinions and well understand the implications to the very life and safety of our nation.

As commander in chief of the Army and Navy, I have directed that all measures be taken for our defense.

But always will our whole nation remember the character of the onslaught against us.

No matter how long it may take us to overcome this premeditated invasion, the American people in their righteous might will win through to absolute victory.

I believe that I interpret the will of the Congress and of the people when I assert that we will not only defend ourselves to the uttermost, but will make it very certain that this form of treachery shall never again endanger us.

Hostilities exist. There is no blinking at the fact that our people, our territory and our interests are in grave danger.

With confidence in our armed forces - with the unbounding determination of our people - we will gain the inevitable triumph - so help us God.

I ask that the Congress declare that since the unprovoked and dastardly attack by Japan on Sunday, December 7th, 1941, a state of war has existed between the United States and the Japanese empire.

I need to find a passage that be used in the following situations and write a paragraph about it
1.a passage that could be used by Woodrow Wilson for entering WWI (with minor changes)
2. a passage that could be used for a post 9/11 speech
3. a passage that contains something inappropriate or offensive for citizens today

hopefully you can answer 1 or all of the questions above or give me some ideas im stumped


1. There is no blinking at the fact that our people, our territory and our interests are in grave danger.

2.The facts of yesterday and today speak for themselves. The people of the United States have already formed their opinions and well understand the implications to the very life and safety of our nation.

3. so help us God. (not everyone is christian?)
The last one I am not so sure about. Maybe the statement about never forgetting the treachery….

ape2016 | Jan 17, 2010

Adventures of Pluto Nash, The

Posted in Uncategorized with tags , , , , , , , , , , , , , , on April 29, 2010 by felixmanning1980

Adventures of Pluto Nash, The
Adventures of Pluto Nash, The (2002)

IMDB rating: 3.70

Plot: After his successful night club is blown to flaming bits, Pluto and his band travel across the moon looking for clues as to who is behind the arson. Along with Bruno and Dina, Pluto visits a seedy motel, his secret hide out and the casino of the most powerful man on the moon searching for the evil doer, only to find out that the destruction of his club may have been his own fault

Directors: Underwood Ron

Actors: Cleese John,Murphy Eddie,Quaid Randy,Pantoliano Joe,Mohr Jay,Guzman Luis,Rebhorn James,Boyle Peter,Young Burt,Nunez Jr. Miguel A.,Varnado Victor,Action,Comedy,Sci-Fi,

What are some movies that suck?
I keep a list of movies that suck, below is my list so far in alphabetical order. Yes, every Sci-Fi Channel Original Movie is on there. What are some movies that are NOT THERE that can be added?

-A. I. Assault
-Abominable
-Absolon
-Adventures of Pluto Nash
-Alien Apocalypse
-Alien Express
-Alien Hunter
-Alien Lockdown
-Alien Siege
-Alien vs. Predator
-Alien vs. Predator: Requiem
-All The President’s Men
-Amazing Colossal Man
-An Inconvenient Truth
-Anaconda 3: Offspring
-Anacondas: Trail of Blood
-Android Apocalypse
-Anonymous Rex
-Antibody
-Are We Done Yet?
-Are We There Yet?
-Attack of the Sabretooth
-Aztec Rex
-Baal: The Storm God
-Baby Mama
-Babylon 5: The Legend of the Rangers
-Ballistic: Ecks vs. Sever
-BarberShop
-BarberShop 2: Back in Business
-Basilisk: The Serpent King
-Batman & Robin
-Bats: Human Harvest
-Battle Planet
-Battlefield Earth
-Beauty Shop
-Behind Enemy Lines: Colombia
-Beyond Loch Ness
-Beyond Re-Animator
-Billboard Dad
-Biodome
-Black Hole
-Bloodmonkey
-Bloodsuckers
-Boa vs. Python
-Bone Eater
-Bone Snatcher
-Bugs
-Capote
-Catwoman
-Caved In: Prehistoric Terror
-Cerberus
-Cheetah Girls
-Cheetah Girls: One World
-Chupacabra: Dark Seas
-Clive Barker Presents: Saint Sinner
-Condemned
-Control Factor
-Copperhead
-Crimson Force
-Cube 2: Hypercube
-Cyclops
-Daredevil
-Darklight
-Date Movie
-Day The Earth Stood Still
-Dead and Deader
-Deadly Swarm
-Deathlands: Homeward Bound
-Decoys
-Deep Shock
-Descent
-Disaster Movie
-Disaster Zone: Volcano in New York
-Do or Die
-Dog Soldiers
-Dragon Dynasty
-Dragon Fighter
-Dragon Storm
-Dragon Sword
-Dragonball Evolution
-Dungeons & Dragons 2: Wrath of the Dragon God
-Earthstrom
-Encrypt
-Epic Movie
-Epoch
-Epoch: Evolution
-Erin Brockovich
-Fallen Ones
-Fire & Ice
-Fire Serpent
-Flu Bird Horror
-Frankenfish
-From Justin to Kelly
-Gargoyles: Wings of Darkness
-Ghost Voyage
-Ghouls
-Gigli
-Godzilla
-Grendel
-Gryphon
-Hammerhead: Shark Frenzy
-Happening
-Harpies
-Haunted Prison
-Headless Horseman
-Heatstroke
-Highlander: The Source
-House of the Dead 2
-Hulk
-I Know Who Killed Me
-Ice Spiders
-IF2: Interceptor Force 2
-Immortal Voyage of Captain Drake
-Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull
-Insider
-Jackie Chan Presents: Metal Mayhem
-KAW
-Kazaam
-Kraken: Tentacles of the Deep
-Lake Placid 2
-Larva
-Lightspeed
-Living Hell
-Locusts: The 8th Plague
-Lord of the Flies
-Lost City Raiders
-Lost Treasure of the Grand Canyon
-Lost Voyage
-Love Guru
-Magma: Volcanic Disaster
-Mama Mia
-Mammoth
-Man with the Screaming Brain
-Mansquito
-Man-Thing
-Manticore
-March of the Penguins
-Master of Disguise
-Meet Dave
-Meet the Spartans
-Mega Shark vs. Giant Octopus
-Mega Snake
-Milk
-Mindstorm
-Minotaur
-Momentum
-Monster Ark
-Mystic River
-Napoleon Dynamite
-New York Minute
-NYC: Tornado Terror
-Odysseus: Voyage to the Underworld
-Orge
-Out for Blood
-Painkiller Jane
-Passport to Paris
-Path of Destruction
-Phantom Force
-Polar Storm
-Post Impact
-Project Viper
-Pterodactyl
-Pumpkinhead: Ashes to Ashes
-Pumpkinhead: Blood Feud
-Puppet Master vs. Demonic Toys
-Pythons 2
-Race to Freedom
-Raptor Island
-Reign of the Gargoyles
-Return of the Living Dead 4: Necropolis
-Return of the Living Dead 5: Rave from the Grave
-Revenge of The Swamp Thing
-Riddles of the Sphinx
-Riverworld
-Rock Monster
-S.S. Doomtrooper
-Sabretooth
-Sands of Oblivion
-Sasquatch Mountain
-Savage Planet
-Scary Movie 4
-Sea Beast
-Shark in Venice
-Showdown at Area 51
-Silent Warnings
-Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants
-Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants 2
-Slayer
-Slipstream
-Snake King
-Snakehead Terror
-Snow Dogs
-Something Beneath
-Soulkeeper
-Species III
-Species: The Awakening
-Splinter
-Super Hero Movie
-SuperBabies: Baby Geniuses 2
-Supergator
-Swamp Devil
-Taxi
-They Are Among Us
-This Christmas
-Threshold
-Vipers
-Warbirds
-Webs: The Movie
-Welcome Home Roscoe Jenkins
-When in Rome
-Wraiths of Roanoke
-Wyvem
-xXx: State of the Union
-Yeti: Curse of The Snow Demon
-Zyzzyx Road


Your missing without a doubt the worst film I have ever seen,
Manos: The Hands of Fate

Also some definite adds are:
Plan 9 from Outer Space
Monster A Go-Go
Hobgoblins
Santa With Muscles
Monsturd (an actual film about a giant killer turd)
The Bat People
Troll 2
Chairman of the Board
Dumb and Dumberer
Toxic Avenger

…there are more but these are definitely the worst that came to mind.

Jakob Kane | Jun 21, 2009


Capote and March of the Penguins were not bad movies.
JimCarrey728 | Jun 21, 2009


Scary Movie 1, 2 and 3
Duffman | Jun 21, 2009


Alone in the dark.
gridagent | Jun 21, 2009


Glitter
Showgirls
Captivity
Citizen Kane
The Good Shepard

Yes, I Know Who Killed Me was so dreadfully dull.

And when you put "Descent," please tell me you are referring to the god-awful piece of garbage starring Rosario Dawson where she gets raped and not the most amazing horror movie to come out in the past 20 years: THE Descent.
frantadelous | Jun 21, 2009


Land of the Dead
Vee | Jun 21, 2009


mortal kombat 2 ahnilation ..just watch the acting in this film and the story plot it goes pretty much no where…the first film was successful ..and this one pretty much butchered it ..now they are thinking about rebooting the whole thing if they come out with another one

ghost ship- it turned out ok in the begining starting to look like a real horror movie…but once u get to the ending you’ll know nothing makes sense …worst horror film of all time

eddie murphy- anything where eddie murphy is playing one of those dad roles in a family film…its like he never turns down a script …go back to your nutty professor and morbit ways where u are successful as a comedian and actor

region of fire- the movie about flying dragons that stars christian bale and mattew mconghy …the preview look awesome but the movie flat out sucked
jordan | Jun 21, 2009


wow that’s a long list! lol

how about… he’s just not that into you
Ashley :) | Jun 21, 2009


the bratz movie is horrible, it didn’t even make it 2 theaters

Nick of Time

Posted in Uncategorized with tags , , , , , , , , , , , on April 28, 2010 by felixmanning1980

Nick of Time
Nick of Time (1995)

IMDB rating: 6.20

Plot: Gene Watson (Johnny Depp) is an ordinary public accountant returning home from his ex-wife’s funeral and is met by Mr Smith (Christopher Walken) and Ms. Jones (Roma Maffia) who kidnap his daughter (Courtney Chase) and give him a gun, six bullets, a name-tag that will give him access to anywhere in a specific hotel, and the itinerary of Governor Grant (Marsha Mason) and is informed that he must kill the Governor in 1 hour and 15 minutes or his daughter will die. The rest of the movie follows Mr. Watson as he desperately attempts to warn the Governor without the knowledge of the two and finds out that the conspiracy against her reaches all the way to those she trusts most.

buy Nick of Time and instant download

Directors: Badham John

Actors: Depp Johnny,Walken Christopher,Strauss Peter,Smitrovich Bill,Spradlin G.D.,Vazquez Yul,Ortega Armando,Bau C.J.,Thriller,Drama,Crime,

When do new weekly episodes of Big Time Rush air on Nick?
The first episode of Big Time Rush for 2010 aired on a Monday. That was the only time it aired on a Monday though I believe, so I was just wondering if it came on a different day now instead?

thanks


They only aired it on a Monday that one time because it was Martin Luther King Day, and Nick had a special iCarly episode scheduled that night as a lead-in for the premiere

iCarly has a new time slot on Friday night for new episodes at 8, which leads into all new episodes of Big Time Rush at 8:30.
OMFG | Feb 06, 2010

Alive

Posted in Uncategorized with tags , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , on April 27, 2010 by felixmanning1980

Alive
Alive (1993)

IMDB rating: 6.90

Plot: The amazing, true story of a Uruguayan rugby team’s plane that crashed in the middle of the Andes mountains, and their immense will to survive and pull through alive, forced to do anything and everything they could to stay alive on meager rations and through the freezing cold. The only thing the team has riding on after losing so many of their good friends and family members is the slim chance of making it through alive and their faithfulness to God.

Directors: Marshall Frank

Actors: Hawke Ethan,Spano Vincent,Hamilton Josh,Ramsay Bruce,Newton John,Kriegel David,Breznahan Kevin,Behrens Sam,Noseworthy Jack,Meoli Christian J.,Carpenter Jake,DeLorenzo Michael,Zuniga Jose,Nucci Danny,Drama,Action,Adventure,Thriller,

11 weeks pregnant and have brownish discharge?
this light drown discharge came out but i have no severe pain or nothing…i went 2 the er last night and dey did a vaginal ultrasound and told me da baby is too small 2 see the heart beat or 2 see if its even alive…but cant you see the heart beat when dey do da normal ultrasound on you tummy? im already 11 weeks i think i should see the heart beat…i dnt know what the brownish discharge could mean..i was told that is normal the first trimester…plz any help im really scared..does anyone know what this means? or had the same experience? plz help


You should be able to see a baby and heart beat by vaginal ultrasound at 11 weeks- go see your OB and have blood work done!
littlemiss | Feb 09, 2010


they should defiantly see the heartbeat by that age… might be best to go get a second opinion… hope every thing is ok good luck…
Jo due feb | Feb 09, 2010

Baader Meinhof Complex, The

Posted in Uncategorized with tags , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , on April 27, 2010 by felixmanning1980

Baader Meinhof Complex, The
Baader Meinhof Complex, The (2008)

IMDB rating: 7.40

Plot: Germany in the 1970s: Murderous bomb attacks, the threat of terrorism and the fear of the enemy inside are rocking the very foundations of the yet fragile German democracy. The radicalised children of the Nazi generation lead by Andreas Baader, Ulrike Meinhof and Gudrun Ensslin are fighting a violent war against what they perceive as the new face of fascism: American imperialism supported by the German establishment, many of whom have a Nazi past. Their aim is to create a more human society but by employing inhuman means they not only spread terror and bloodshed, they also lose their own humanity. The man who understands them is also their hunter: the head of the German police force Horst Herold. And while he succeeds in his relentless pursuit of the young terrorists, he knows he’s only dealing with the tip of the iceberg.

Directors: Edel Uli

Actors: Bleibtreu Moritz,Liefers Jan Josef,Erceg Stipe,Schmidt Niels-Bruno,Kiefer Vinzenz,Licht Simon,Schilling Tom,Lommatzsch Daniel,Blomberg Sebastian,Dilssner Eckhard,Action,Biography,Crime,Drama,History,

Oscar Nominations and Predictions (for some)?
Best Picture
The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Frost/Nixon
Milk
The Reader
Slumdog Millionaire

Prediction: Slumdog Millionaire

DIRECTING

The Curious Case of Benjamin Button - David Fincher
Frost/Nixon - Ron Howard
Milk - Gus Van Sant
The Reader - Stephen Daldry
Slumdog Millionaire - Danny Boyle

Prediction: Gus Van Sant

ACTOR (Actor in a Leading Role)
Richard Jenkins - The Visitor
Frank Langella - Frost/Nixon
Sean Penn - Milk
Brad Pitt - The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Mickey Rourke - The Wrestler

Prediction: Sean Penn

ACTRESS (Actress in a Leading Role)
Anne Hathaway - Rachel Getting Married
Angelina Jolie - Changeling
Melissa Leo - Frozen River
Meryl Streep - Doubt
Kate Winslet - The Reader

Prediction: Angelina Jolie

SUPPORTING ACTOR (Actor in a Supporting Role)
Josh Brolin - Milk
Robert Downey Jr. - Tropic Thunder
Philip Seymour Hoffman - Doubt
Heath Ledger - The Dark Knight
Michael Shannon - Revolutionary Road

Prediction: Heath Ledger

SUPPORTING ACTRESS (Actress in a Supporting Role)
Amy Adams - Doubt
Penelope Cruz - Vicky Cristina Barcelona
Viola Davis - Doubt
Taraji P. Henson - The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Marisa Tomei - The Wrestler

Prediction: Marisa Tomei

ORIGINAL SCREENPLAY
Frozen River
Happy-Go-Lucky
In Bruges
Milk
WALL-E

ADAPTED SCREENPLAY
The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Doubt
Frost/Nixon
The Reader
Slumdog Millionaire

ORIGINAL SONG

"Down to Earth" - WALL-E
"Jai Ho" - Slumdog Millionaire
"O Saya" - Slumdog Millionaire

ORIGINAL SCORE

The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Defiance
Milk
Slumdog Millionaire
WALL-E

FILM EDITING

The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
The Dark Knight
Frost/Nixon
Milk
Slumdog Millionaire

CINEMATOGRAPHY

Changeling
The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
The Dark Knight
The Reader
Slumdog Millionaire

ART DIRECTION

Changeling
The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
The Dark Knight
The Duchess
Revolutionary Road

COSTUME DESIGN

Australia
The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
The Duchess
Milk
Revolutionary Road

MAKEUP

The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
The Dark Knight
Hellboy II: The Golden Army

SOUND MIXING

The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
The Dark Knight
Slumdog Millionaire
WALL-E
The Wrestler

SOUND EDITING

The Dark Knight
Iron Man
Slumdog Millionaire
WALL-E
The Wrestler

VISUAL EFFECTS

The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
The Dark Knight
Iron Man

ANIMATED FEATURE FILM

Bolt
Kung Fu Panda
WALL-E

FOREIGN LANGUAGE FILM

Baader Meinhof Complex - Germany
The Class - France
Departures - Japan
Revanche - Austria
Waltz with Bashir - Israel

DOCUMENTARY (Feature)

The Betrayal (Nerakhoon)
Encounters at the Far End of the World
The Garden
Man on Wire
Trouble the Water

DOCUMENTARY (Short Subject)

The Conscience of Nhem En
The Final Inch
Smilk Pinki
The Witness - From the Balcony of Room 306

SHORT FILM (Animated)

La Maison en Petits Cubes
Lavatory - Lovestory
Oktapodi
Presto
This Way Up

SHORT FILM (Live Action)

Auf der Strecke (On the Line)
Manon on the Asphalt
New Boy
The Pig
Spielzeugland (Toyland)


Best Picture
Slumdog Millionaire, Curious Case, or the Reader

DIRECTING
Danny Boyle even though I don’t think he really deserves it, Slumdog was great but not amazing

ACTOR (Actor in a Leading Role)
Mickey Rourke

ACTRESS (Actress in a Leading Role)
Meryl Streep

SUPPORTING ACTOR (Actor in a Supporting Role)
Heath Ledger! he was amazing! =D

SUPPORTING ACTRESS (Actress in a Supporting Role)
Marisa Tomei will probably win

ORIGINAL SCREENPLAY
WALL-E

ADAPTED SCREENPLAY
The Reader

ORIGINAL SONG
"Jai Ho" -Slumdog

ORIGINAL SCORE
Defiance

FILM EDITING
The Dark Knight

CINEMATOGRAPHY
The Dark Knight

ART DIRECTION
Curious Case or Revolutionary Road

COSTUME DESIGN
The Dutches

MAKEUP
The Dark Knight

SOUND MIXING
The Dark Knight

SOUND EDITING
The Dark Knight

VISUAL EFFECTS
The Dark knight but th Curious case will probably win that one

ANIMATED FEATURE FILM
WALL-E (so cute)

FOREIGN LANGUAGE FILM
Im American? haha

DOCUMENTARY (Feature)
Man on Wire

DOCUMENTARY (Short Subject)
Don’t know . . . sorry

SHORT FILM (Animated)
Haven’t seen them, but I have heard that Presto was not bad

SHORT FILM (Live Action)
Haven’t seen those . . . so I can’t tell you

MOVIE LUVER | Jan 22, 2009

Fire Down Below

Posted in Uncategorized with tags , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , on April 27, 2010 by felixmanning1980

Fire Down Below
Fire Down Below (1957)

IMDB rating: 6.10

Plot: Tony and Felix own a tramp boat, and sail around the Caribbean doing odd jobs and drinking a lot. They agree to ferry the beautiful but passportless Irena to another island. They both fall for her, leading to betrayal and a break-up of their partnership. Tony takes a job on a cargo ship. After a collision he finds himself trapped below deck with time running out (the ship is aflame), and only Felix, whom he hates and has sworn to kill, left to save him.

Download Fire Down Below

Directors: Parrish Robert

Actors: Mitchum Robert,Lemmon Jack,Lom Herbert,Colleano Bonar,Lee Bernard,Illing Peter,Connor Edric,Newley Anthony,Pohlmann Eric,Murton Lionel,Matalon Vivian,Tanner Gordon,Kaufmann Maurice,Adventure,Drama,

Is my descriptive writing any good?
Hi, I was just wondering if my descriptive writing was any good? I’m a 15 year old girl and I love to read and write stories and poems. I am currently in the middle of a story but apparently it is over descriptive. I just wanted to know other people’s take on my writing style. Thanks.

"The dark, deathly black panther slipped through the emerald, green forest. His blazing, golden eyes a fire. His paws padded softly on the forest’s, ferny floor. The sound of a opposing panther echoed within the forest, the panther whipped round, His lip curling back to show a deadly pair of pearly white teeth. The panther yowled once, flicking it’s tail to it’s side hard. He watched the other panther emerge from the bushes. His eyes smoldering to a thirsty red, he lunged forward towards the panther, his jaw connecting with it’s neck. He sunk his razor, sharp teeth into the panther’s flesh. A scream was heard, then nothing."

"The radiant, copper chestnut stallion galloped freely over the plain lands. His muscles rippling under his sleek, glossy coat. His mane whipped wildly against his arched neck, his tail a streaming banner. He screeched without fear, his legs pounded to a halt. He reared, his fore legs stabbing the air, he brought them down to the soft, earth with a thud. He tossed his head violently and bolted forward, his hooves painfully tore up the ground where they met. His ears pricked to the sound of a shrill whinny, he slowed to a smooth, rhythmic trot. His head held high with curiosity. he returned the whinny with a friendly nicker, his eyes bulged with eagernesss he approached the dappled grey mare.

"The golden eagle soared effortlessly into the pink painted sky, her wings flowing in the gentle breeze. Her flashing colour shimmered in the rays of the sun, it looked as if it had streaks of gold embedded into her feathers. Her beady, cunning eyes scanned the island below. She un clenched it’s claws ready to strike for the innocent brown hair below, she squawked and soared down to her prey."

Thanks and tell me what you think. :)


Ever heard of purple prose? To much description makes for a badly written book/story/writing example.

Let me just point out as an example in the first paragraph, when you say "… the emerald, green forest." Not only do you NOT need that comma there (so in other words it should be written ‘the emerald green forest.’) but it’s also repetitive. I mean… if we understand that the forest is an emerald color why do you need to tell us it’s green? Aren’t emeralds green? It’s like me saying that, ‘her hair was as clear as a transparent diamond’ or something. It should be understood that diamonds are transparent, so why do I need to explain/describe that?

Ok, my general opinion of this is that I do enjoy the way it’s written. I mean, yes, I can clearly see this in my head, and I enjoy it, but the technical parts of the grammar and the abundance of descriptive words just distracts me. It’s kind of like I’m cutting through the jungle of description with a machete, and all these useless words are just annoying patches of dead grass that I have to cut in order to see through it all.

Also, the more COLORS you use, the more aware your reader will be that you’re using colors. Re-read this out loud and you’ll notice more and more the yellows, oranges, pinks, greens, and all those other fluffy words. You might find them a little annoying after you notice how often they’re used.

And please, understand that you’re misusing commas pretty badly. You don’t separate something that describes something just because you have two different words. I already said one example in my second paragraph, but I just found another one "…to the soft, earth with a thud." Read that aloud… it will sound like this : to the soft (PAUSE) earth with a thud." It’s not right. Let me show you somes do’s and don’ts for things like this:

DO:

The soft amber-like waves glided across the shore.
The soft, amber-like waves glided across the shore. Either one works here I think.

Tenaciously, quietly, he put his foot down on the ground and began to walk.

DON’T:

The red, sun came over the mountain staining the valley below with an ominous cloud.
that should be written like this : The red sun came over the mountain, staining the valley below with an ominous cloud.
I really don’t want to bore you anymore so I’ll just stop there. ENJOY!!!

Just Human | Feb 02, 2010


Hmm, you know you don’t have to describe every little thing? It gets a bit tedious to read. But if you use it sparingly your descriptions are good.
Cam | Feb 02, 2010


Umm, it’s well written. You’ve got talent, but I feel that this is way too much description. Description is always good, don’t get me wrong, but too much can get annoying.

Hope this helps :) Julianne T | Feb 02, 2010


It isn’t the amount of description that’s the problem, it’s the number of adjectives and adverbs.

In the first three sentences there are four times where there are two adjectives separated by a comma. Readers pause a little at commas, so lots of double adjectives makes for really awkward reading.

I suggest you pick out some books you like, and read a couple of passages while paying really close attention to how the authors use their adjectives and adverbs.
felliax | Feb 02, 2010


First I have to say those descriptions are amazing. I really liked the one with You shouldn’t list describing words though.For example: "Radiant copper chestnut stallion." You could say radiant copper stallion. Or just one word. But three wouldn’t work. The writing looks great though. Keep working on it!!!
J J Sponge | Feb 02, 2010


Whoever told you it was over descriptive is right.

The dark deathly black panther — if it’s black, it can be assumed it’s dark. And what is a deathly panther? What is a deathly anything? Is it even a word? Generally, if a word ends in ly (adverbs) you want to cut them from your writing.

Emerald green forest — have you ever seen one? Forests are generally all different shades of green and brown and other colors.

His paws padded softly — what is padding? Walking softly. So cut softly (an ly word)

Radiant copper chestnut stallion — why is it radiant? Does it glow in the dark? Does it shine like the sun? How does it give off light? And is it copper or chestnut? They’re two different colors.

The point is - don’t use description just to use it. Describe the panther or the horse, or whatever else you describe, as it really is. That’s what makes it real. All the other stuff will just make readers laugh or groan.
Just Wondering | Feb 02, 2010

Bodyguard, The

Posted in Uncategorized with tags , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , on April 25, 2010 by felixmanning1980

Bodyguard, The
Bodyguard, The (1992)

IMDB rating: 5.30

Plot: A pop singer has been receiving threatening notes, and her manager hires a bodyguard known for his good work. The bodyguard ruffles the singer’s feathers and most of her entourage by tightening security more than they feel is necessary. The bodyguard is haunted by the fact that he was on Reagan’s secret service staff but wasn’t there to prevent the attack by Hinckley. Eventually the bodyguard and the singer start an affair, and she begins to believe his precautions are necessary when the stalker strikes close to home.

Directors: Jackson Mick

Actors: Costner Kevin,Cobbs Bill,Waite Ralph,Kemp Gary,Arana Tomas,Starr Mike,Birt Christopher,Nixon DeVaughn,Bamman Gerry,Urla Joe,Pierce Tony,Keating Charles,Wuhl Robert,Romance,Drama,Thriller,Music,

Can anyone help me come up with names for my characters?
I’m writing a story, but I’m having trouble coming up with good names for my characters. I need names from desert countries (Egypt, Arabia (?), ect.)
Please don’t tell me to check some place that lists names from them countries ’cause I already know some places to check, but I don’t want to go through some long list for names unless I have to.

Here’s some stuff about my characters and their current names (they’re all Japanese because manga has infected my mind XD) in case it’ll help.

Current Name: Rin/Rei Name Meaning: Cold or resevered/Ghost (I think)
About: He’s the main character and is an imortal, genderless being (though refered to and lives as a boy.) He can easily pass for either gender (for obvious reasons) and doesn’t show his true feelings often, usually putting on a casual front and he’s a bit childish. He looks 12 but is actually over 200. He has many powers.
Note: His name doesn’t have to be like the others.

Current Name: Natsu Name Meaning: Summer
About: He’s the younger brother of the king and the comanding general of the royal army (or whatever you call the leader of an army.) He controls water and his personality reflect that, meaning he’s usually very easy-going/goes with the flow, but when something truly angers him he becomes terrifying (usual when those he cares about are in harmed or threatened.)

Current Name: Sai Name Meaning: My son (I think)
About: He’s the king’s advisor and best friend. He controls earth/ground and is a very serious, intelligent person.
Note: His name doesn’t have to be like the others.

Current Name: Aki Name Meaning: Fall
About: He’s the king and controls the element air. He’s usually a calm induvidual but can become fierce. He’s a very doting father.

Current Name: Gertrude/Sasha Name Meaning: ??? (I never looked it up)
About: She’s a Roma and controls spirit. She was an old lady when she was known as Gertrude, but after making a contract with Rin/Rei she’s become a enternally young woman in her twenties named Sasha. She can see into people’s hearts and is very care-free and a bit motherly of Rin/Rei.
Note: Her anem can be a Roma/Gypsy name and I need a name for her old self and young self.

Current Name: Haru Name Meaning: Spring
About: He’s the prince and is only 9. He controls plants. Since he’s still a child he behaves like one and is very fun-loving and care-free. He doesn’t think before he acts so he can often get in trouble but his bodyguard helps keep him from getting into any serious trouble.

Current Name: Taiki or Taki (I forget which one’s right for the meaning) Name Meaning: Atmisphere (sp)
About: He’s the prince’s guard, closest friend, and big brother figure. He’s only 17, the second youngest of the group, but he looks older than he is. He looks intimidating, but he’s actually very gentle. He controls the beasts/animals (as an element) and has a strong love of nature and animals that most of his race share.
Note: His name can be something Native American.

I also need help coming up with a name for the country (which is a desert country if you didn’t figure it out) and the races.
The races are -
Trukin- Rin/Rei’s the last member of the race which was known for it’s pwoers and believed to be the children of Gods (which is where the name comes from. True comebined with Kin.)
Roma- Gertrude/Sasha’s race and based on the Roma/gypsies.
Nagain- Sai’s race. Known for their fair skin that never seeems to darken, beauty, and intelligence. (The names was just something that popped into my head.)
Unnamed- Taiki/Taki’s race and simular to Native Americans.

Wedding Crashers

Posted in Uncategorized with tags , , , , , , , , , , , on April 25, 2010 by felixmanning1980

Wedding Crashers
Wedding Crashers (2005)

IMDB rating: 7.20

Plot: Divorce mediators John Beckwith and Jeremy Grey are business partners and lifelong friends who share one truly unique springtime hobby—crashing weddings! Whatever the ethnicity of the wedding party—Jewish, Italian, Irish, Chinese, Hindu—the charismatic and charming duo always have clever back stories for inquisitive guests and inevitably become the hit of every reception, where they strictly adhere to their proven rules of wedding crashing to meet and pick up women aroused by the very thought of marriage. At the tail end of another successful season of toasting brides and grooms, Jeremy learns that the daughter of Treasury Secretary William Cleary and his wife, Kathleen, is getting married in what is sure to be the Washington D.C. social event of the year. After infiltrating the lavish affair, John and Jeremy quickly set their sights on two bridesmaids, Claire and Gloria Cleary. With the lavish reception in full swing, Jeremy works his game plan to perfection in seducing Gloria, but John’s flirtation banter with Claire is unexpectedly impeded by her pompous, Ivy League boyfriend Sack. Having uncharacteristically fallen hard and fast for Claire, John convinces a resistant Jeremy to bend the crashing rules and accept an invitation to an extended weekend party at the Cleary family compound. Once at the palatial waterfront estate, John and Jeremy endure a multitude of comical mishaps at the hands of the dysfunctional members of the Cleary family, but also learn a few unexpected lessons about love and relationships.

Directors: Dobkin David

Actors: Wilson Owen,Vaughn Vince,Walken Christopher,O’Donnell Keir,Cooper Bradley,Canada Ron,Gibson Henry,Yoakam Dwight,Conrad David,Comedy,Romance,

Funny movie suggestions?
Does anyone have any suggestions for some good funny movies; like the Hangover or Wedding Crashers?

Thanks guys! =)


Step brothers, The Anchorman,Super bad, Funny People, and Hot Rod

ddKatieddO | Jan 24, 2010


Scary Movieeee 1,2,3&4 :D sayit81 | Jan 24, 2010


The Proposal…

So funny!

Have you seen Miss Congeniality? Most Sandra Bullock movies are funny.
Happy Camper | Jan 24, 2010


zoolander is hilarious
T Horse | Jan 24, 2010


The hangover totally i love allen!
Melissa | Jan 24, 2010


Pineapple Express is hilarious
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Transformers: The Movie, The

Posted in Uncategorized with tags , , , , , , , , , , , , on April 25, 2010 by felixmanning1980

The Movie, The
Transformers: The Movie, The (1986)

IMDB rating: 7.20

Plot: It is the year 2005. The war between The Autobots and Decepticons has escalated all the way to Cybertron, which the Decepticons have reclaimed. The Autobots, without Optimus Prime after a conflict on Earth takes his life, must now face a destiny they know nothing of. Megatron and a group of forsaken Decepticons have been reformed by the ultimate transformer, a planet consuming demon known as Unicron into even deadlier warriors. Now Galvatron, Scourge and Cyclonus must destroy The Autobot Matrix of Leadership for Unicron’s glory or suffer the horrific destruction of Cybertron. However, Optimus Prime has decreed that an Autobot will rise from his rank and use the power of The Matrix to light the darkest hour of the Autobots. With Hot Rod facing responsibility for Prime’s death, he feels he may be able to use the power of the Matrix to turn the tide of the Cybertronian Wars and stop Unicron. Until all are one, the future of the Autobots and Decepticons is uncertain.

Directors: Shin Nelson

Actors: Alden Norman,Alden Norman,Angel Jack,Bell Michael,Bell Michael,Bell Michael,Bell Michael,Berger Gregg,Burghardt Arthur,Burton Corey,Burton Corey,Burton Corey,Carmel Roger C.,Carmel Roger C.,Animation,Action,Adventure,Family,Sci-Fi,

I bought my boy a t shirt from Transformers what would he think…?
He’s always telling me he loves that movie and I was at hot topic today.in the sale part Lol and I saw this t shirt from transformers and is not from the movie is from the cartoons..He’s kind of picky whit his clothes..and Im starting to think the shirt is for girls because it’s large..but it’s small for being a large..I mean It even fits me and Im a Small..my guy is skinny so I think I would be tight but It would fit him..I hope whatever the thing is this is the first thing I have ever bought to him..and im Kind of worried..I dont know if he would be offended or if he think it’s cute..what would you think..

PS.sorry if my spelling is not perfect..enligsh is not my first language and im trying to practice
boyfriend!!


I’m not sure if this is for you boyfriend, or your son. if its your boyfriend then definitely not, and if its your son, then 10 or younger, then yes. i hope this helps
Grayfox2713 | Jan 29, 2010

Little Ashes

Posted in Uncategorized with tags , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , on April 25, 2010 by felixmanning1980

Little Ashes
Little Ashes (2008)

IMDB rating: 7.30

Plot: In 1922, Madrid is wavering on the edge of change as traditional values are challenged by the dangerous new influences of Jazz, Freud and the avant-garde. Salvador Dali arrives at the university; 18 years old and determined to become a great artist. His bizarre blend of shyness and rampant exhibitionism attracts the attention of two of the university’s social elite - Federico Garcia Lorca and Luis Bunel. Salvador is absorbed into their youthfully decadent group and for a time Salvador, Luis and Federico become a formidable trio, the most ultra-modern group in Madrid. However as time passes, Salvador feels and increasingly strong pull towards the charismatic Federico - who is himself oblivious of the attentions he is getting from his beautiful writer friend, Magdalena. In the face of his friends’ preoccupations - and Federico’s growing renown as a poet - Luis sets off for Paris in search of his own artistic success. Federico and Salvador spend the holiday in the sea-side town of Cadaques. Both the idyllic surroundings and the warmth of the Dali family sweep Federico off his feet. Salvador and Frederico draw closer, sharing their deepest beliefs, inspirations and secrets, convinced that they have found a kind of friendship not dreamed of by others. It is more that a meeting of the minds; it is a fusion of souls.

i download here Little Ashes here and download version for iPhone

Directors: Morrison Paul

Actors: Beltran Javier,Pattinson Robert,McNulty Matthew,Allue Adria,Andreu Simon,Arroyo Ruben,Audi Ferran,Devant Adrian,Enrich Borrellas Ramon,Lahoz Ferran,Oro Bruno,Pico Joan,Pujol Marc,Rodrigo Christian,Drama,

How do you make charcoal?
Is charcoal a derivative of coal or is it left over ashes from a wood fire…..or neither. Just looking to see how I can make charcoal from the most basic materials (fire, wood, etc).

Looking to make the charcoal so I can burn a real hot fire with little to no flame. Thanks.

Yes, I know I can buy it really cheap and pretty much everywhere. But I’m looking to make it myself.


Visit this website http://www.velvitoil.com/Charmake.htm
it will really help you :)….

patriciajoy.sasuman | Feb 02, 2010


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